Back with another discussion. If you haven’t read this book, go do so and come back so we can talk.
Larson – https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/33235410-larson
Now onto the discussion…
This book wasn’t good you guys. Just my honest opinion. This author has several books out of which none I’ve read and I’m not even sad about that. In fact, this book isn’t even available on Amazon at the moment. I hope it’s so that that author can go back to the drawing board and fix up this story.
It was written pretty amateur-ly yup, made that up, and I found myself shaking my head a lot.
The biggest problem I had was the dialog. It just wasn’t believable. I mean, I don’t know everyone in the world, but I find it hard to believe that anyone speaks the way these characters did. This was a novella so the story was a bit on the rushed side. It just wasn’t believable. Especially the ending.
The clown story was so overdone. I’m guessing at the time that this was written and released, it’s been sitting on my kindle for awhile, those clown stories were big. You know… the clowns that were running around scaring people. The author tried to capitalize on that but it was so overdone, I said that already, and it just became more annoying than attention-grabbing. I feel like there was a better way to pull of this semi “terrorists” storyline.
And the sex. Oh God. I have read a lot and I mean a lot of erotica in the last few months and none made me cringe as much as this book. It wasn’t sexy in the least. I’m guessing that is what the author was trying to accomplish but all it did was make me not want to read it. There is a way that you write sex scenes where they are entertaining and there is a way that you write them that makes you feel like you reading porn and poorly written porn. This was the latter.
It was as if the author read a few eroticas and thought “this is how it’s done. Throw in a bunch of c***s and p****s and gold.” I have never been so embarrassed to read a book before… aside from that menage book, you know the one.
I for one am glad that it’s over and I gave this one two stars… was I being too generous? Did you read it? What did you think?
Let me know in the comments.
The next book up for discussion is…
Kindle – https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B01MRC34OM/ref=oh_aui_d_detailpage_o00_?ie=UTF8&psc=1
Paperback – https://www.amazon.com/Lost-Found-September-Day-1/dp/1944423176/ref=tmm_pap_swatch_0?_encoding=UTF8&qid=&sr=
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